1. really (過於口語話)

    e.g. The swimmer really performed admirably. 這個游泳者真讓人敬佩。
    正確示範：The swimmer performed admirably.

    1. things（過於泛）

    e.g. The article said a lot of things. 這篇文章講了很多東西。
    正確示範：The article said a lot of principle of interior design. 這篇文章講了很多室內設計的原則。

    1. I believe, I feel, I think (會顯得對自己的看法沒信心)

    e.g. I believe the researcher has a great point here. 我認為研究者講了一個很棒的觀點。
    正確示範：The researcher has a great point here.

    1. very (過於口語化)

    Very good => Wonderful 太棒了
    Very bad => Atrocious 糟透了

    1. You (會讓讀者代入自己，和“我”有什麼關係？)

    e.g. You should not eat too much fast food. 你不應該吃太多快餐。
    正確示範：One should not eat too much fast food.

    1. Some (不夠具體)

    something 有些東西
    sometimes 有時候
    somewhere 有的地方
    somewhat 有點
    somebody 有人
    somehow 不知怎麼的

    1. -ing (讓動詞變弱)

    e.g. Sarch was running through the woods. 薩拉在森林中奔跑。
    正確示範：Sarch ran through the woods.

    1. -ly (副詞修飾的不夠明確)

    e.g. She laughed loudly.
    正確示範：Her loud laugh seemed to reverberate through the party like a gong.
    她的笑聲像鑼聲一樣穿透了整個聚會。