美国外教老师Debby为小学生Judith小朋友录制的作文视频点评：
本次Judith的英文作文题目是“The New Years Eve”
The New Years Eve - By Judith
When it was the New Year Eve. I was super excited. When I was at grandma’s house I got to set fireworks with my little brother.
My little brothere is very cute. He likes to be silly. He makes me laugh a lot. When we had loud fireworks. They made me jump.
I and my little brother watched TV too. I had to dump the fire. It is a tradition.
Then I hung the lantern on little and big trees. The garden was the gimmering with red light. We had a good year.
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