下面这个视频是2020年1月6号，外教Debby老师对Champion 作文修改点评所录制的一个视频：

    Champion feedback gr 3-5 lesson 2.mp4 (12.17MB) 英文作文题目是： 写一篇关于某个重要节日的短文

    Champion的作文原稿：

    Today is a Chines New Year.

    Me and my family went to Long bei. There is a big house. That is my uncles house.

    We buy a lot of fireworks. I chust them?

    At night, mom said I can light the fireworks , it is fun.