第3句

  1. the phenomenon can be read from many a perspective among which i would name three most significant ones as follows
  2. the causes of the phenomenon in the picture are manifold(多种多样的)，and the issue itself should be handled with due care

第4~6句：分论点

让步论点

存在负面现象

负面现象 seems to [be nothing serious]/[bring temporary profits]，but when subjected to careful consideration，it will prove to be the sword of Damocles threatening xxx

  • xxx可以是：
    • the well being of many people
    • the/their sustainable/long-term development
    • their international relationship
    • the survival and development of each group

万能例子

the case is best illustrated by the example of xxx，which，to my best acknowledge，is not/[by no means] an isolated instance，but one that can be seen everywhere

论点1：解释原因

  1. 物质基础

just as Karl Marx once out it，”the economic basis determines the superstructure”。[in similar fashion]/similarly，we may reasonably say that the unprecedented improvement of XXX serves as the material basis for such a situation because a mounting number of sb find it possible to do sth in this day and age

  • xxx：the society economy；our living standards；the science and technology；the infrastructure(基础设施)

    论点2：分析利弊

论点3：多元化观点

论点4：推断结果/展望未来

结尾

承上启下句

  1. from the previous discussion we can safely come to the conclusion that 主题 indeed merits our contemplation(深思; 沉思) in more ways than one
  2. from the previous discussion we can safely come to the conclusion that 主题 will continue to influence all our aspects of our life in the long run
  3. the above-mentioned can naturally lead us to the conclusion that 主题’s strength far outweigh its drawbacks

建议句

  1. it’s advisable that everyone related should frame a correct concept
  2. joint effects should be made by the government and society。the former is responsible to issue effective laws to discipline misdeeds，and the latter，as the first step towards the improvement of the situation ，is to infuse correct awareness of the topic into everyone。

总结句

  1. bearing the previous points in mind，we can spend our life happily and meaningfully
  2. if the measures should be taken，we would be bound for a promising future
  3. only by doing this，can we resume a harmonious relationship with others

rmonious relationship with others