This sentence is grammatically incorrect. Please revise.

    这句话在语法上是不正确的。请修改。

    The subject and verb do not agree in this sentence. Please correct.

    主语和动词在这句话中不一致。请改正。

    This phrase seems out of place. Please rephrase to improve clarity.

    这句话似乎不合适。请重新措辞以表达更清晰。

    I have used a passive voice in this sentence. Consider using an active voice instead.

    我在这句话中使用了被动语态。考虑改用主动语态。