This sentence is grammatically incorrect. Please revise.

    请修改这句话在语法上不正确的地方

    The subject and verb do not agree in this sentence. Please correct.

    请改正主语和动词在这句话中不一致的地方

    This phrase seems out of place. Please rephrase to improve clarity.

    这句话似乎不合适。请重新措辞以表达更清晰。

    I have used a passive voice in this sentence. Consider using an active voice instead.

    我在这句话中使用了被动语态。考虑改用主动语态。