I started to write an academic paper, the title is XXXXX, now I have finished the introduction part, but I am not sure whether it is suitable, can you help me to read it, and put forward detailed and specific revision suggestions?

    我开始写论文了，题目是XXXXX，现在我完成了引言部分，但是不确定是否合适，你能帮我看一下，并提出详细具体的修改意见吗？