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If You Forget Me
By Pablo Neruda(巴勃罗·聂鲁达)
I want you to know one thing.
我想让你知道一件事
You know how this is:
你知道是这样的：
if I look
如果我眺望
at the crystal moon, at the red branch
宝石般的月亮，和窗前
of the slow autumn at my window,
漫长秋季的红枝头
if I touch
如果我
near the fire
在火边，轻触
the impalpable ash
抓不住的尘灰
or the wrinkled body of the log,
或者满身带着皱纹的死木
everything carries me to you,
世间所有都带我朝你而去
as if everthing that exists,
仿佛每件生存的事物：
aromas, light, metals,
气味，光线，金属
were little boats
都像小船
that sail toward those isles of yours
扬帆
that wait for me
指向你每一个期盼着我的小岛
Well, now,
但是啊
if little by little you stop loving me
如果你一点点地停止爱我
I shall stop loving you little by little
我也将停止爱你，一点点地
If suddenly
如果突然
you forget me
你忘记我
do not look for me
别寻找我
for I shall already have forgotten you.
因为我将早已忘记了你
If you think it long and mad,
我生命中
the wind of banners
过往的猎猎疾风
that passes through my life,
如果你嫌它太长太疯狂
and you decide
于是你决定
to leave me at the shore
把我抛弃在
of the heart where I have roots,
我心中长着根的岸边
remember
记住了
that on that day,
在那一天
at that hour,
在那一时刻
I shall lift my arms
我将伸展双臂
and my roots will set off
我的根会出发
to seek another land.
去寻找另一片土地
But
但是
if each day,
如果每一天
each hour,
每一刻
you feel that you are destined for me
你感觉你是我的命中注定
with implacable sweetness,
心中带着无法平息的甜蜜
if each day a flower
如果每天都有一朵鲜花
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
爬上你的嘴唇寻觅我
ah my love, ah my own,
啊，我的爱人，啊，属于我的你
in me all that fire is repeated,
我心中的火会不断燃烧
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
什么都不会熄火或忘却，
my love feeds on your love, beloved,
我的爱将与你的爱互相依赖，亲爱的
and as long as you live it will be in your arms
在你活着的每一天，我们的爱便不会
without leaving mine.
从你我的怀里离开

讲解

I want you to know one thing.
我想让你知道一件事 ↑
You know how this is: 宾语从句
你知道是这样的： this = one thing

if I look
如果我眺望
at the crystal moon, at the red branch 比喻 branch of autumn，秋季的枝头
宝石般的月亮，和窗前
of the slow autumn at my window,
漫长秋季的红枝头

if I touch
如果我
near the fire 地点状语提前
在火边，轻触 if I touch the impalpable ash or the
the impalpable ash = wrinked body of the log near the fire
抓不住的尘灰
or the wrinkled body of the log,
或者满身带着皱纹的死木

everything carries me to you,
世间所有都带我朝你而去
as if everthing that exists, as if ≠ if；if是如果，as if是 似乎（与现实相反）
仿佛每件生存的事物： 定语从句，that exists修饰everything，表示只要存在的东西
aromas, light, metals, 插入语，举例everything that exists
气味，光线，金属 aroma（好闻的）气味【褒义】【可数】 smell 气味【中性】
were little boats 虚拟语气：are were
都像小船
that sail toward those isles of yours 定语从句，修饰boats
扬帆
that wait for me 定语从句，修饰isles
指向你每一个期盼着我的小岛

如果突然
you forget me
你忘记我 for介词引出原因，for = because
do not look for me 将来完成时
别寻找我 - 时间：将来
for I shall already have forgotten you. - 动作状态：完成
因为我将早已忘记了你 在将来的某一时刻，在那时候我已经把你忘掉了

If you think it long and mad, think + 宾语 + 宾语补语
我生命中 指代下一句，the wind…my life 认为…是…样的 eg. I think it difficult 认为它难
the wind of banners banner n. 旗帜

过往的猎猎疾风
that passes through my life,
如果你嫌它太长太疯狂
and you decide
于是你决定
to leave me at the shore
把我抛弃在
of the heart where I have roots, 定语从句，修饰heart
我心中长着根的岸边

remember
记住了
that on that day,
在那一天
at that hour,
在那一时刻
I shall lift my arms
我将伸展双臂
of the heart where I have roots,
and my roots will set off set off: 启程，动身
我的根会出发
to seek another land.
去寻找另一片土地

But
但是
if each day, destined to do… eg. I am destined to love you.
如果每一天 命中注定做… 我命中注定会爱上你
each hour, denstined for… eg. I am destined for you.
每一刻 命中注定是… 我命中注定是你的
you feel that you are destined for me implacable 难以平息的
你感觉你是我的命中注定 implacable seeetness 难以平息的甜蜜（深深的甜蜜）
with implacable sweetness, eg. implacable hatred 难以化解的仇恨
心中带着无法平息的甜蜜 状语修饰feel
if each day a flower
如果每天都有一朵鲜花
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
爬上你的嘴唇寻觅我
ah my love, ah my own,
啊，我的爱人，啊，属于我的你

in me all that fire is repeated,
我心中的火会不断燃烧
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
什么都不会熄火或忘却，
with implacable sweetness,
my love feeds on your love, beloved, beloved做名词，我的爱人
我的爱将与你的爱互相依赖，亲爱的
and as long as you live it will be in your arms 在你怀里
在你活着的每一天，我们的爱便不会
without leacing mine.
从你我的怀里离开

个人笔记

再往下就是笔者个人的笔记啦，因为是个英语菜鸡，所以可能大概也许会有亿点点基础词汇，英语水平高的大佬们大可不必看下去啦，啾咪，谢谢你看到我整理的笔记，一起支持兔老爹呀
the impalpable ash
抓不住的尘灰
or the wrinkled body of the log,
或者满身带着皱纹的死木
impalpable adj. 触摸不到的；感觉不着的；难以理解的；难懂的
记忆技巧：im 不 + palpable 摸得着的 → 无法触及的
词根词缀 im 不
palpable adj. 易于察觉的；可意识到的；明显的
记忆技巧：palp 感觉；摸 + able …的 → 摸得着的
词根词缀 able有能力的，可以的
palpus n. 须肢；触须